Blood Pet
2 Parts
Hey! Well, this is the first chapter of a novel length story that I've been writing for the past year. As of now, I have about 27 out of 35 ...
I wrote this for a Comp II assignment, it came out better then I expected, I'd just thought I'd share! ____________________________ Hansel and Gretel- The Witch’s Tale As told by ...
Here's Chapter Two, Enjoy: Elizabeth swung her locker door open. She was deftly aware of her friend babbling on next to her. She just wasn’t sure what she happened to ...
I just want to thank all of those who have read and commented on this so far! I really appreciate it! I've already written 27 chapters out of the planned ...
I just want to thank sokool15 for commenting on Chapter Three! Here's Chapter 4: __________________________________ Elizabeth sighed as she sat down in her usual seat on the bus that afternoon. ...
Wanted to thank sokool15 again for commenting!! Thank you very much for the helpful pointers, I changed some of the problems in the last chapter and proofread this chapter for ...
To sokool15- this becomes a romance I swear!! The romance part just won't come for several more chapters... this is really more of a supernatural story then a romance one, ...
EDIT: This has been edited thanks to the critiques! Well, I've decided to keep posting this story, I don't want to take this story away from the few that are ...
EDIT: I've made some changes to this due to the suggestions/criticisms of both sokool15 and bigbadbear, thanks guys!! Well, this will be my last update for a few days, I ...
EDIT: I've edited this story, thanks to sokool15 and bigbadbear! Well, I changed some things in last chapter thanks to the critique! And this does turn into a romance!! It's ...
Hey! I actually have nothing to say... so, here's chapter 10: ___________________________ “Do you know why you’re here?” was the first question that he asked. Elizabeth was surprised, she had ...
EDIT: This has been edited, thanks to socool15 for all the helpful pointers! So, I've decided to post the rest of this story two chapters at a time, just really ...
Well, I think I've waited long enough to post the next two chapters. CHAPTER THIRTEEN “David what did you do with the girl?” Darren stood in the doorway of the ...
I know I waited forever to post these next chapters... but that's because I was really hoping I would have some comments that were somewhat helpful! Not that the nice ...
Alright, well the rating had been moved back down to PG-13, but please let me know if the rating should be moved back up and if it should stay at ...
Well, I wrote this for an assignment in my Creative Writing class I took in high school. I'm not really a poet, but I thought that this came out a ...
This poem is kind of personal, but I really liked it... so,please tell me what you think! EDIT: I am not a poet... I am more of a novel writer ...
Well, sorry for this late post... I have been busy. School just started back up and everything. Anyway, this will most likely be my last post of this particular story... ...